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cinemabrantan
20th June 2010, 07:25 PM
Shidhilaveechikal

By Hasim Mohamed
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'നേര്*രേഖയില്* പൊയ്ക്കൊണ്ടിരുന്ന നമ്മുടെ ജീവിതവും ലോകവും, ആദ്യം ഒന്നു പിരിഞ്ഞു.പിന്നെയും പിരിയുന്നു.അങ്ങനെ ഇനിയും എത്രയെത്ര ശിഖരങ്ങളാവുന്നു.ഒന്നും സ്ഥിരമല്ല.അപ്പോള്* ഒരു ഉത്തരത്തിനു എന്താണു പ്രസക്തി.ചോദ്യങ്ങള്* ഒരോ നിമിഷവും ഉയര്*ന്നു കൊണ്ടിരിക്കുന്നു.കാരണം എല്ലാവര്*ക്കും ജീവിതത്തിന്റെ ഒരോ നിമിഷവും പുതിയതും അപരിചിതവും ആണല്ലോ?' മാറുന്ന ലോകത്തില്* അയഥാര്*ത്ഥമെന്ന വണ്ണം ശിഥിലമാവുന്ന മനുഷ്യപ്രതിസന്ധിയുടെ ആഖ്യാനം.

Dear Friends,

ആശങ്കകളോടെ എന്റെ ഒരു ലഘുനോവല്* ഞാന്* നിങ്ങള്*ക്ക് മുന്നില്* സമര്*പ്പിക്കുകയാണ്*.ഇതു ഡൌണ്*ലോഡ് ചെയ്തു വായിച്ച് എല്ലാവരും അഭിപ്രയങ്ങള്* പറയുകയും റിവ്യൂ ഇടുകയും ചെയ്യണം എന്ന് അഭ്യര്*ഥിക്കുന്നു.

Shidhilaveechikal by Hasim Mohamed in Literature & Fiction (http://www.lulu.com/product/ebook/shidhilaveechikal/11396563)

സസ്നേഹം
സിനിമാഭ്രാന്തന്*

Kannettan
20th June 2010, 07:26 PM
thnx bhai, downloading

Aryan007
20th June 2010, 07:27 PM
thanks Hasim ...vayichitu review idam. :grin:

Paramasivam
20th June 2010, 07:28 PM
thanks kannettan...

~Saji~
20th June 2010, 07:29 PM
download cheythukondirikkunnu..


superrrrrrrrrrrrrrr:kayyadi:

Abhi
20th June 2010, 07:30 PM
thanks friend . eppol office anu flatil chennittu down load cheythu vayichittu abhiprayvum ariyikkam.

Kannettan
20th June 2010, 07:31 PM
thanks kannettan...
enthinu??:surprise:

chunakuttan
20th June 2010, 07:31 PM
thanks bhai..... will read.

Edupole valla linkum undel pls post.......

thanks...

Mahi
20th June 2010, 07:32 PM
download cheythukondirikkunnu..


superrrrrrrrrrrrrrr:kayyadi:

download thudangiyapolekum saji abiprayam paranjo? :lol:

Paramasivam
20th June 2010, 07:32 PM
enthinu??:surprise:

vaayichu detail review idu.....
appo athu vayichal mathiyallo.. :naughty:

Mahi
20th June 2010, 07:33 PM
thanks kannettan...

neeyum fitana?
kannettan alla brantana link ittath:lol:

Sootran
20th June 2010, 08:04 PM
GreaT dAAAAA

Congrats vayichittu review idaam..

Pankajakshan
20th June 2010, 08:24 PM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! Entey oru swapnam aanidhu...

Sure aayum vaayichu review idunnadhaanu..Publishers aayo?

cinemabrantan
20th June 2010, 09:42 PM
thnx bhai, downloading


thanks Hasim ...vayichitu review idam. :grin:


thanks kannettan...


thanks friend . eppol office anu flatil chennittu down load cheythu vayichittu abhiprayvum ariyikkam.


thanks bhai..... will read.

Edupole valla linkum undel pls post.......

thanks...


GreaT dAAAAA

Congrats vayichittu review idaam..


Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! Entey oru swapnam aanidhu...

Sure aayum vaayichu review idunnadhaanu..Publishers aayo?


Welcome All....

cinemabrantan
20th June 2010, 09:44 PM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! Entey oru swapnam aanidhu...

Sure aayum vaayichu review idunnadhaanu..Publishers aayo?

publishersine thedi iranganam....!Ennaal athinu mathram okke undo ennokke enikku thanne urappilla..adyathe attempt alle!vayichu para..


Innale DC Booksinu emailil soft copy ayachu...Hard copy ayachu tharooo...Committeede munnil vachu theerumaanam edukkum ennu marupadi kitti...

Pankajakshan
20th June 2010, 10:12 PM
Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!! Entey oru swapnam aanidhu...

Sure aayum vaayichu review idunnadhaanu..Publishers aayo?

publishersine thedi iranganam....!Ennaal athinu mathram okke undo ennokke enikku thanne urappilla..adyathe attempt alle!vayichu para..


Innale DC Booksinu emailil soft copy ayachu...Hard copy ayachu tharooo...Committeede munnil vachu theerumaanam edukkum ennu marupadi kitti...


Ok..appo idhengane aanu..websiteil kadhakal sweekarikkunundo? Btw 51 pages alley..oru Novell aayi koottaam alley? Adho valiya short story??

Pankajakshan
20th June 2010, 10:12 PM
Btw da next saturdayey vaayikkaan patullu..vaayichu PMil marupadi idaam.

~Saji~
20th June 2010, 10:23 PM
2 chapters vaayichu....

Pankajakshan
20th June 2010, 10:24 PM
2 chapters vaayichu....


Enganund?

~Saji~
20th June 2010, 10:25 PM
Enganund?

valare nallathaanu. :hurray:

starlord
21st June 2010, 01:15 AM
Kollamallo....Congrats........ njan downloadi..... vayichittu afiprayam parayam.......... :smile:

sivaraman
21st June 2010, 07:52 AM
downloading............... vaayichittu review idam bhai:kidilam:

Fontu
21st June 2010, 07:55 AM
wow..!!congrats Bhranthan anna...:dancing::dancing::dancing: vayikkate..

Jaggu
21st June 2010, 08:35 AM
Thanks bhai.. Njan downloadi.. Vaayichitt abhiprayam parayaaam..

cinemabrantan
21st June 2010, 03:22 PM
[QUOTE=cinemabrantan;558811]


Ok..appo idhengane aanu..websiteil kadhakal sweekarikkunundo? Btw 51 pages alley..oru Novell aayi koottaam alley? Adho valiya short story??

Short Novel..Novellet..ennokke parayam..

Lulu.com is a place where u can self publish your books

cinemabrantan
21st June 2010, 03:23 PM
Kollamallo....Congrats........ njan downloadi..... vayichittu afiprayam parayam.......... :smile:


downloading............... vaayichittu review idam bhai:kidilam:


wow..!!congrats Bhranthan anna...:dancing::dancing::dancing: vayikkate..


Thanks bhai.. Njan downloadi.. Vaayichitt abhiprayam parayaaam..

Welcome friends....

~Saji~
24th June 2010, 12:15 AM
Hasim Muhammad :salut::salut::salut:

"Prasidha kadhakrithu Hasiminte adya novel adyamaayi review cheytha oraal aanu njaan" ennu bhaaviyil nalaalodu parayaan saadhikkum ennu viswasichukondu oru cheriya review idunnu....

Shidhila veechikal enna krithi valare uyarnna nilavaaram pularthunna onnaanu.

Oru krithi avalokanam cheyyaan ulla yogyatha enikkundo ennariyilla. pakshe valarnnu varunna oru kadhakaarante adya novel review cheyyunnathinte credit njaan ettadukkaam ennu vachu..:peace:

Oru krithiye njaan avalokanam cheyyaan sameepikkunathu randu aspect vachittaanu. onnu athu vaayikkumbol undaavunna oru "rasam" allenkil athinte readability. randu athu vaayichu kazhinju nammude manassil nilanilkkunna impact. randum prathyekam avalokanam cheyyaan sramikkaam..

Readability ennu parayumbol, athinte bhaashayude ozhukkum, ezhuthinte khadanayum, Kadayude samvedanaathmakathayum aanu nokkendathu. Hasiminte bhaasha valare nilavaaram ullathaanu. nalla ozhukkulla bhaasha. vakkukalude khadanayum, vaachakangalude khadanayum, mothathil ulla khadanayum okke pradhaanamaanu. athil apporvamaayi chila vaakkukalum vaachakangalude khadanayum kallukaldi aavunnundennu venamenkil parayaam. pakshe athu valare apoorvam mathram aanu..athuthanne person to person maarukayum cheyyum.

Kadhayude mothathil ulla khadanayil oru cheriya prasnam thonniyathu, avasaanippichathu randu kathukaliloode aanu. adyathethu valare nallathaayi. pakshe ikkakkayude kathu aa kadhayude motham intensitiye baadhichu, oru convergence kuravu pole thonni. pakshe atharamoru ending palarkkum valare ishtappedaanum sadhyatha undu..

Pinne ullathu kadhayude ozhukkaanu. Adya bhaagam Rasiyayude kadha ee adutha kaalathu vaayicha nalla anubhavangalil onnaayirunnu. rasiyayum avalude ooshmalamaaya bandhathiloode aa kudumbathineyum nammal ishtappettupokunna oru avastha. pakshe randaam bhaagathilekku vannappol, ezhuthukaarante oru self portrait document cheyyunnathupole thonni. aa oru ozhukku nashtappettu. alpam dry aayi...pakshe athinte avasaana bhaagangalilekku varumbol, veendum valare uyarnna nilavaarathilekku kadha ethippedukayaanu. athine nyayeekarikkum vidham, Rasiyayude kathu manassil thattunnathaayi...madakka kathu aa oru uyarnna stepil ninnum onnum thaanum poyi..

Over all WOW!!!!!! aduthakaalathu vaayicha puthiya ezhuthukaarude krithikalil nalla nilavaaram pularthiya onnu..


Hasim, Ningal ezhuthukaaran aavenda aal thanne aanu. Just continue...:cheers::cheers::cheers:

cinemabrantan
24th June 2010, 12:48 AM
Hasim Muhammad :salut::salut::salut:

"Prasidha kadhakrithu Hasiminte adya novel adyamaayi review cheytha oraal aanu njaan" ennu bhaaviyil nalaalodu parayaan saadhikkum ennu viswasichukondu oru cheriya review idunnu....

Shidhila veechikal enna krithi valare uyarnna nilavaaram pularthunna onnaanu.

Oru krithi avalokanam cheyyaan ulla yogyatha enikkundo ennariyilla. pakshe valarnnu varunna oru kadhakaarante adya novel review cheyyunnathinte credit njaan ettadukkaam ennu vachu..:peace:

Oru krithiye njaan avalokanam cheyyaan sameepikkunathu randu aspect vachittaanu. onnu athu vaayikkumbol undaavunna oru "rasam" allenkil athinte readability. randu athu vaayichu kazhinju nammude manassil nilanilkkunna impact. randum prathyekam avalokanam cheyyaan sramikkaam..

Readability ennu parayumbol, athinte bhaashayude ozhukkum, ezhuthinte khadanayum, Kadayude samvedanaathmakathayum aanu nokkendathu. Hasiminte bhaasha valare nilavaaram ullathaanu. nalla ozhukkulla bhaasha. vakkukalude khadanayum, vaachakangalude khadanayum, mothathil ulla khadanayum okke pradhaanamaanu. athil apporvamaayi chila vaakkukalum vaachakangalude khadanayum kallukaldi aavunnundennu venamenkil parayaam. pakshe athu valare apoorvam mathram aanu..athuthanne person to person maarukayum cheyyum.

Kadhayude mothathil ulla khadanayil oru cheriya prasnam thonniyathu, avasaanippichathu randu kathukaliloode aanu. adyathethu valare nallathaayi. pakshe ikkakkayude kathu aa kadhayude motham intensitiye baadhichu, oru convergence kuravu pole thonni. pakshe atharamoru ending palarkkum valare ishtappedaanum sadhyatha undu..

Pinne ullathu kadhayude ozhukkaanu. Adya bhaagam Rasiyayude kadha ee adutha kaalathu vaayicha nalla anubhavangalil onnaayirunnu. rasiyayum avalude ooshmalamaaya bandhathiloode aa kudumbathineyum nammal ishtappettupokunna oru avastha. pakshe randaam bhaagathilekku vannappol, ezhuthukaarante oru self portrait document cheyyunnathupole thonni. aa oru ozhukku nashtappettu. alpam dry aayi...pakshe athinte avasaana bhaagangalilekku varumbol, veendum valare uyarnna nilavaarathilekku kadha ethippedukayaanu. athine nyayeekarikkum vidham, Rasiyayude kathu manassil thattunnathaayi...madakka kathu aa oru uyarnna stepil ninnum onnum thaanum poyi..

Over all WOW!!!!!! aduthakaalathu vaayicha puthiya ezhuthukaarude krithikalil nalla nilavaaram pularthiya onnu..


Hasim, Ningal ezhuthukaaran aavenda aal thanne aanu. Just continue...:cheers::cheers::cheers:

Priyappetta Saji annan...Ente adyathe niroopakanum abhyuthayakamshiyumaaya vyakthi enna nilayil thankalodulla kadappadu njan uchathil thanne vilichu paranju kollatte...

Jeevithathinte thirakkil..varandu pokunna manasine nokki palappozhum bheethiyode njan swayam chodikkarund?..oru ezhuthukaran aavan enikku kazhiyomo?athinulla minimum kazhivu enikkundo?Thankalude vaakkukal enikku dairyam nalkunnu..

Ithu ezhuthi kazhinjappozhum oru lajjayode,paribhramathode njan kurachu naal kaathirunnu..Ithil enthenkilum undo?njan enganeyaanu vayanakkare neriduka.Thankal enikku athmavishvaasam nalkunnu..

Nandi....:wub:

~Saji~
24th June 2010, 02:41 AM
Priyappetta Saji annan...Ente adyathe niroopakanum abhyuthayakamshiyumaaya vyakthi enna nilayil thankalodulla kadappadu njan uchathil thanne vilichu paranju kollatte...

Jeevithathinte thirakkil..varandu pokunna manasine nokki palappozhum bheethiyode njan swayam chodikkarund?..oru ezhuthukaran aavan enikku kazhiyomo?athinulla minimum kazhivu enikkundo?Thankalude vaakkukal enikku dairyam nalkunnu..

Ithu ezhuthi kazhinjappozhum oru lajjayode,paribhramathode njan kurachu naal kaathirunnu..Ithil enthenkilum undo?njan enganeyaanu vayanakkare neriduka.Thankal enikku athmavishvaasam nalkunnu..

Nandi....:wub:

Ningal aanu resiyayude narration ezhuthiyathu enkil, no doubt...Ningalkku ezhuthaam....Resiyayude vaakkukaliloode vaappa, umma ikkaakka ennivarude lokangalum, bandhangalum okke hridyamaayi thonnunnudu..

:adipoli::adipoli:

Robert Langdon
24th June 2010, 02:51 AM
Wow........! Congrats Hasim anna.... :cheers: Will read it ASAP...

~Saji~
24th June 2010, 03:14 AM
Internetil vaayikkumbol vegam kannu vedanikkum..ini paperile vaayikkunnullu..

Pankajakshan
24th June 2010, 08:19 AM
Hasim Muhammad :salut::salut::salut:

"Prasidha kadhakrithu Hasiminte adya novel adyamaayi review cheytha oraal aanu njaan" ennu bhaaviyil nalaalodu parayaan saadhikkum ennu viswasichukondu oru cheriya review idunnu....

Shidhila veechikal enna krithi valare uyarnna nilavaaram pularthunna onnaanu.

Oru krithi avalokanam cheyyaan ulla yogyatha enikkundo ennariyilla. pakshe valarnnu varunna oru kadhakaarante adya novel review cheyyunnathinte credit njaan ettadukkaam ennu vachu..:peace:

Oru krithiye njaan avalokanam cheyyaan sameepikkunathu randu aspect vachittaanu. onnu athu vaayikkumbol undaavunna oru "rasam" allenkil athinte readability. randu athu vaayichu kazhinju nammude manassil nilanilkkunna impact. randum prathyekam avalokanam cheyyaan sramikkaam..

Readability ennu parayumbol, athinte bhaashayude ozhukkum, ezhuthinte khadanayum, Kadayude samvedanaathmakathayum aanu nokkendathu. Hasiminte bhaasha valare nilavaaram ullathaanu. nalla ozhukkulla bhaasha. vakkukalude khadanayum, vaachakangalude khadanayum, mothathil ulla khadanayum okke pradhaanamaanu. athil apporvamaayi chila vaakkukalum vaachakangalude khadanayum kallukaldi aavunnundennu venamenkil parayaam. pakshe athu valare apoorvam mathram aanu..athuthanne person to person maarukayum cheyyum.

Kadhayude mothathil ulla khadanayil oru cheriya prasnam thonniyathu, avasaanippichathu randu kathukaliloode aanu. adyathethu valare nallathaayi. pakshe ikkakkayude kathu aa kadhayude motham intensitiye baadhichu, oru convergence kuravu pole thonni. pakshe atharamoru ending palarkkum valare ishtappedaanum sadhyatha undu..

Pinne ullathu kadhayude ozhukkaanu. Adya bhaagam Rasiyayude kadha ee adutha kaalathu vaayicha nalla anubhavangalil onnaayirunnu. rasiyayum avalude ooshmalamaaya bandhathiloode aa kudumbathineyum nammal ishtappettupokunna oru avastha. pakshe randaam bhaagathilekku vannappol, ezhuthukaarante oru self portrait document cheyyunnathupole thonni. aa oru ozhukku nashtappettu. alpam dry aayi...pakshe athinte avasaana bhaagangalilekku varumbol, veendum valare uyarnna nilavaarathilekku kadha ethippedukayaanu. athine nyayeekarikkum vidham, Rasiyayude kathu manassil thattunnathaayi...madakka kathu aa oru uyarnna stepil ninnum onnum thaanum poyi..

Over all WOW!!!!!! aduthakaalathu vaayicha puthiya ezhuthukaarude krithikalil nalla nilavaaram pularthiya onnu..


Hasim, Ningal ezhuthukaaran aavenda aal thanne aanu. Just continue...:cheers::cheers::cheers:


Wow :banana:

Sootran
24th June 2010, 08:28 AM
Hasim Muhammad :salut::salut::salut:

"Prasidha kadhakrithu Hasiminte adya novel adyamaayi review cheytha oraal aanu njaan" ennu bhaaviyil nalaalodu parayaan saadhikkum ennu viswasichukondu oru cheriya review idunnu....

Shidhila chinthakal enna krithi valare uyarnna nilavaaram pularthunna onnaanu.

Oru krithi avalokanam cheyyaan ulla yogyatha enikkundo ennariyilla. pakshe valarnnu varunna oru kadhakaarante adya novel review cheyyunnathinte credit njaan ettadukkaam ennu vachu..:peace:

Oru krithiye njaan avalokanam cheyyaan sameepikkunathu randu aspect vachittaanu. onnu athu vaayikkumbol undaavunna oru "rasam" allenkil athinte readability. randu athu vaayichu kazhinju nammude manassil nilanilkkunna impact. randum prathyekam avalokanam cheyyaan sramikkaam..

Readability ennu parayumbol, athinte bhaashayude ozhukkum, ezhuthinte khadanayum, Kadayude samvedanaathmakathayum aanu nokkendathu. Hasiminte bhaasha valare nilavaaram ullathaanu. nalla ozhukkulla bhaasha. vakkukalude khadanayum, vaachakangalude khadanayum, mothathil ulla khadanayum okke pradhaanamaanu. athil apporvamaayi chila vaakkukalum vaachakangalude khadanayum kallukaldi aavunnundennu venamenkil parayaam. pakshe athu valare apoorvam mathram aanu..athuthanne person to person maarukayum cheyyum.

Kadhayude mothathil ulla khadanayil oru cheriya prasnam thonniyathu, avasaanippichathu randu kathukaliloode aanu. adyathethu valare nallathaayi. pakshe ikkakkayude kathu aa kadhayude motham intensitiye baadhichu, oru convergence kuravu pole thonni. pakshe atharamoru ending palarkkum valare ishtappedaanum sadhyatha undu..

Pinne ullathu kadhayude ozhukkaanu. Adya bhaagam Rasiyayude kadha ee adutha kaalathu vaayicha nalla anubhavangalil onnaayirunnu. rasiyayum avalude ooshmalamaaya bandhathiloode aa kudumbathineyum nammal ishtappettupokunna oru avastha. pakshe randaam bhaagathilekku vannappol, ezhuthukaarante oru self portrait document cheyyunnathupole thonni. aa oru ozhukku nashtappettu. alpam dry aayi...pakshe athinte avasaana bhaagangalilekku varumbol, veendum valare uyarnna nilavaarathilekku kadha ethippedukayaanu. athine nyayeekarikkum vidham, Rasiyayude kathu manassil thattunnathaayi...madakka kathu aa oru uyarnna stepil ninnum onnum thaanum poyi..

Over all WOW!!!!!! aduthakaalathu vaayicha puthiya ezhuthukaarude krithikalil nalla nilavaaram pularthiya onnu..


Hasim, Ningal ezhuthukaaran aavenda aal thanne aanu. Just continue...:cheers::cheers::cheers:

:hurray: :hurray: :hurray: :hurray: :hurray:

Wcup choodu kazhinjittu vayikkam ennu karuthunnu

sertzui
24th June 2010, 08:42 AM
I cannot download this . Any reason

cinemabrantan
24th June 2010, 11:57 AM
I cannot download this . Any reason

Wt error r u getting?R u using the download tab on the right side?

EmmeS
24th June 2010, 04:03 PM
Download cheythu vaayichittu reply idaam...

Ithinte illustration thankal aano cheythathu...

Malayalam type cheyyuvan varamozhi download cheyyuka... Mistakes illathe type cheyyam....

cinemabrantan
24th June 2010, 06:30 PM
Welcome Emmes.

double chankan
27th June 2010, 03:18 PM
ee thread kore naalayi miss aayi pokunnu...

G2G review vayichappo kayyode vayichekkam ennu karuthi..

cinemabrantan
27th June 2010, 03:54 PM
Welcome Double chankaaaaa...

double chankan
27th June 2010, 05:07 PM
Cinema Brantha,,

Vayana seelam enno ninnu poya enne pole ulla oraalk otta irippinu vayichu teerkan tonnicha oru novel tannathinu aadyamayi nandi :) :)


Enikk tonniya chila opinions taazhe:

+ves:
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1. An interesting back drop. Aadyamayi puram lokam kanunna oru koumarakarideyum avalude brotherindeyum contrasting pictures valare nannayi varachu kanichirikunnu..

2. Same with the falling out of family relations these days...

-ves:
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1. Language ithiri koode simplify cheyyamarunnu ennu tonni. Valare innocent aaya Rasiya and avalude ikkakkayude POVil koodi pokunna kathak ithra katti venamo???

2. Orupaadu vishayangal ee kathayil kaikaryam cheyyan sramicho?
Globalisationde effects muthal phedophilia vare...

Oru Doubt:

Bangalore part of the story tudangumbo narration ithiri confusing alle?
Eg: Ikkakka ennu refer cheyunna udane tanne "avan" ennum...

Aaranu narrate cheyunne ennu confusion....

Verdict: I liked the first half of the part rather than 2nd!!!

Good beginning macha.. Keep writing...

cinemabrantan
27th June 2010, 05:31 PM
Cinema Brantha,,

Vayana seelam enno ninnu poya enne pole ulla oraalk otta irippinu vayichu teerkan tonnicha oru novel tannathinu aadyamayi nandi :) :)


Enikk tonniya chila opinions taazhe:

+ves:
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1. An interesting back drop. Aadyamayi puram lokam kanunna oru koumarakarideyum avalude brotherindeyum contrasting pictures valare nannayi varachu kanichirikunnu..

2. Same with the falling out of family relations these days...

-ves:
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1. Language ithiri koode simplify cheyyamarunnu ennu tonni. Valare innocent aaya Rasiya and avalude ikkakkayude POVil koodi pokunna kathak ithra katti venamo???

2. Orupaadu vishayangal ee kathayil kaikaryam cheyyan sramicho?
Globalisationde effects muthal phedophilia vare...

Oru Doubt:

Bangalore part of the story tudangumbo narration ithiri confusing alle?
Eg: Ikkakka ennu refer cheyunna udane tanne "avan" ennum...

Aaranu narrate cheyunne ennu confusion....

Verdict: I liked the first half of the part rather than 2nd!!!

Good beginning macha.. Keep writing...


:wub::wub::wub:Thanks Double chankan....

Ikkaakka enna vvyakthiye peru polum soochippikkathe, aathma predisandi neeridunna yuvaakkalude predhinidhi enna nilayil-third partyaayil ninnum narrate cheyyunnathaanu uchitham ennu thonni.....Athu aalochichu thanne eduthathaanu..


Njaan karuthiyathu ellavarkkum 2nd part aavum ishtappeduka ennanu.i was wrong!!.First part saumyavumaanenkil second partil thiricharivukalude/anubhavangalude sankeernatha ulppedanam ennu vichaarichu..

Thanks for your appreciation and opinion..

double chankan
27th June 2010, 05:37 PM
:wub::wub::wub:Thanks Double chankan....

Ikkaakka enna vvyakthiye peru polum soochippikkathe, aathma predisandi neeridunna yuvaakkalude predhinidhi enna nilayil-third partyaayil ninnum narrate cheyyunnathaanu uchitham ennu thonni.....Athu aalochichu thanne eduthathaanu..


Njaan karuthiyathu ellavarkkum 2nd part aavum ishtappeduka ennanu.i was wrong!!.First part saumyavumaanenkil second partil thiricharivukalude/anubhavangalude sankeernatha ulppedanam ennu vichaarichu..

Thanks for your appreciation and opinion..

njan oru serious reader onnumalla... you can perhaps wait for pankan,saroj,sootran, bean, el mariachi etc to comment..