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achukuttan
4th October 2011, 10:11 PM
It was February 13th.She slowly woke up from her afternoon sleep.The cellphone beside her indicated 5.13 in its screensaver.She knew she was overslept.But since it is a Saturday and there's no special plan for the next 3-4 hours she was in no hurry...


She stepped out of her bed and rearranged the pillow and bed sheet.She never liked chaos.She liked everything in order.She went to the washbasin and washed her face looking herself in the mirror for the umpteenth time in her life.She knew she is beautiful and it was a fact always known to her.Her red lips,bubbly cheeks and small but beautiful eyes...All these fetched infinite no: of admirers in her school and ongoing college life.She always loved to be the center of attraction.She chose her dresses such that nobody's eyes will ever miss her.She had a unique dress and color sense for which she was praised by everyone of her friends..


She came back to her room and checked out her cellphone which is a routine for everyone these days and she was no exception..The cellphone screen displayed..”1 new message”...She opened it..It was from her classmate...She started reading it..”It is the season of love..Love is in the air..”..She stopped there and touched the reply button of her touch screen phone and typed..”**** OFF”...and touched the send button...


She was like this.Never cared about how others feel.Hated the word love itself.She just wanted to live her life no strings attached.Inside that beautiful body she developed a mind like this.She wore nice dresses just to get fun in finding anybody in opposite sex develop an infatuation towards her.If anyone came to her for proposing she will so make him a laughing stock.Hence she rarely got proposals...


She moved to kitchen and started making coffee.The addictive aroma of coffee was always her fascination.She pour the hot coffee to the mug and started sipping it.She liked to take food in small volumes consuming a large amount of time.During thins time she used to check mails and chat.She took her laptop and switched it own.Opening Firefox she typed the address www.gmail.com (http://www.gmail.com/) in the address bar.As she has set the remember me box checked it took her directly to her inbox...


As usual it is filled with spam mails.But in between them one of the mails not looked like a spam and it looked like from an id she never expected to get a mail.It was from the same boy who is behind her for the past 2 months in spite of all the jokes made on him.But he never sent her a mail or a message.She clicked the link..and started reading..It just contain one link and a sentence with it...This is fake.ain't it?She clicked on the link..and soon she found herself getting weak as if some stroke had come...The coffee mug fell off from her hand...



She started remembering...It was one week since it had happened...As a routine Saturday night thing she was on her way to the disco in her favorite Maruti Swift.Suddenly the car started behaving abnormally and it came to a halt.”DAMN IT..”She told to herself.and get out of the car.She was not a person who become tensed when finding herself alone in late night.She decided to take a lift and waited for anyone to come.Time passed by and she saw the bright light of a vehicle coming...She stretched her hand in front with a gesture to get a lift.The car stopped in front of her..The window came down..The man inside asked

“To Where?”
“The dance party”,she replied..
"Get in”,he said..


She got in..After sometime she felt something strange..It is 10-20 minutes that she is with him and he hasn't yet asked her name..He was silent from the moment she got in.She looked at him.He looked very handsome and gentle.His rigid muscles were clearly visible in that tight T-Shirt.She expected him to flirt with her right the moment she got in.But he is showing no sign of even talking to her.She found that she is having an infatuation to somebody for the first time in her life.She knew she has to tell what she feels or she will miss him forever after this night.The alcohol inside her gave him strength.She opened her mouth and asked,


“Shall we make love?”For her love only meant this much...Love is sex and it's fun...


He suddenly stopped the car and looked at her eyes.He still didn't say anything.He moved the car to a lonely place..He stepped out of the driver seat and moved to back seat.Without saying anything she followed him.She sat beside him..He placed his hand over her shoulder and brought his face near to her..She found their lips meeting each other..She is experiencing the first kiss of her lifetime.Her breath and heartbeat got faster.She is feeling something that she never experienced before.They slowly started lying on that cozy backseat.She is sweating even though it was feezing cold outside.She found herself willingly let someone explore her.Time passed by.She felt like in some other world all these time.She is slowly coming back to real world.She looked surroun.Her partner was lying nect to her.He was nude.She as well.Her jeans and T-Shirt laid next to her.It was wet with her sweat.Sometime back she was a virgin and now she is not.She will never become one ever again..She amiled at him.He smiled back.Her lips muttered

"Thank You"

She couldn't figure out why she said it.They got dressed up and they drove to the party.On the way he said..

"I didn't know that you were a virgin."
"So what,being virgin is not an honour"She said
"May be."He replied with a smile..

She told him to drop in front of her house as party would be over by now.They never meet once.She never regretted on it.For her chastity and virginity of an unmarried girl are just old concepts made by a male dominated society and nothing changed in her life...


But now she is watching the porno video clip of herself having sex with somebody on the backseat of a car and the link to this clip was sent to her by somebody in her college itself..And viewing the hit count she knew one thing..She is a slut before a crowd.She never feared losing chastity...The only thing she feared was defamation..and she now faces a situation of defamation by losing chastity..She understood the maliciousness behind his beautiful smile..


She didn't think too much,but took a blade and slowly scratched her vein..Blood started oozing out from her wrist.She found her life flowing away in front of her.But she didn't want herself to be viewed as a slut in front of others.Her eyes started fading and it closed forever.Suddenly her cellphone beeped once agian and the message preview only showed this much..



“Love is not only physical,but....”

Godfather
4th October 2011, 10:13 PM
vaaayichu nokkatte...

Antony Moses
4th October 2011, 10:15 PM
Good effort!!!
5.13 oke overslept ennuparayunno???

achukuttan
4th October 2011, 10:18 PM
Good effort!!!
5.13 oke overslept ennuparayunno???

:thanks:

Godfather
4th October 2011, 10:20 PM
Simple english il ezhuthiyathinu big thanks nice one liked it a lot!!!

achukuttan
4th October 2011, 10:25 PM
Simple english il ezhuthiyathinu big thanks nice one liked it a lot!!!

:thanks:

Godfather
4th October 2011, 10:28 PM
:thanks:
Short films edukkan pattiya nice simple stories undo?

hava
9th October 2011, 06:50 AM
good work arjun1618!
well conceived theme...
keep writing!!!!

~Saji~
9th October 2011, 08:28 AM
Thanks Arjjun...muzhuvan vaayichilla..pakshe adyam thanne big thanks...vayicha athrayum nalla simple english..and good one too..

MANIKANDAN
9th October 2011, 11:34 AM
Then kutiykunnathum parakkunnathum paraganam natatthunnathum avasaniykum oru mazha vannal

achukuttan
6th January 2012, 08:27 PM
Thanks Arjjun...muzhuvan vaayichilla..pakshe adyam thanne big thanks...vayicha athrayum nalla simple english..and good one too..

:thanksda:

Sheru
8th January 2012, 10:55 PM
sadarna english paras onnum enikku manasilakarilla...
but itu nalla simple english....
thanks undetta...:D

achukuttan
9th January 2012, 10:49 AM
sadarna english paras onnum enikku manasilakarilla...
but itu nalla simple english....
thanks undetta...:D

:thanksda:

navarannan
9th January 2012, 12:46 PM
Nice read... Avalkku ithu thanne venam :yes:

achukuttan
9th January 2012, 12:57 PM
Nice read... Avalkku ithu thanne venam :yes:

thanks anna :friendsy:

FLICKS
12th January 2012, 09:42 PM
Nice writeup arjun..simple english.. lot of ' she'....
After reading this,Kim kadershin a scandal born celebrity was in my mind...!!

FLICKS
12th January 2012, 09:42 PM
Nice writeup arjun..simple english.. lot of ' she'....
After reading this,Kim kadershin a scandal born celebrity was in my mind...!!

achukuttan
12th January 2012, 09:45 PM
Nice writeup arjun..simple english.. lot of ' she'....
After reading this,Kim kadershin a scandal born celebrity was in my mind...!!

Thanx..

Shalumuba
11th March 2012, 05:52 PM
Hai arjun thante story nannayittund innathe thalamurayude oru chinthayanu u present cheydirikkunnath good job keep it

renjith mvk
13th March 2012, 06:55 PM
Love ennaaal oru VIKKAARA JEEVI aanu.......:kannettan:

Allison
21st September 2012, 01:53 PM
Hi Achukuttan,very heart touching story...But What is love? It is one of the most difficult questions for the mankind. Centuries have passed by, relationships have bloomed and so has love. But no one can give the proper definition of love. To some Love is friendship set on fire for others Maybe love is like luck. You have to go all the way to find it. No matter how you define it or feel it, love is the eternal truth in the history of mankind. Love is patient, love is kind. It has no envy, nor it boasts itself and it is never proud. It rejoices over the evil and is the truth seeker. Love protects; preserves and hopes for the positive aspect of life. Always stand steadfast in love, not fall into it. It is like the dream of your matter of affection coming true.Love can occur between two or more individuals. It bonds them and connects them in a unified link of trust, intimacy and interdependence. It enhances the relationship and comforts the soul. Love should be experienced and not just felt. The depth of love can not be measured. Look at the relationship between a mother and a child. The mother loves the child unconditionally and it can not be measured at all. A different dimension can be attained between any relationships with the magic of love. Love can be created. You just need to focus on the goodness of the other person. If this can be done easily, then you can also love easily. And remember we all have some positive aspect in us, no matter how bad our deeds maybe. And as God said Love all

Thalaivar
2nd February 2013, 06:32 PM
good read!

Ali Imran
2nd February 2013, 09:10 PM
thanks
ithu ninte blog ayirunno
Stories - My Soulmate (http://thehiddenmewithinmyself.weebly.com/stories.html)
njan ithu nerathe vayichitundu

Kannettan
3rd February 2013, 12:57 PM
kollam daa

nidhikutty
3rd February 2013, 01:07 PM
nice

achukuttan
6th February 2013, 10:19 AM
thanks
ithu ninte blog ayirunno
Stories - My Soulmate (http://thehiddenmewithinmyself.weebly.com/stories.html)
njan ithu nerathe vayichitundu

athe..ente bloganu..

achukuttan
6th February 2013, 10:20 AM
Hai arjun thante story nannayittund innathe thalamurayude oru chinthayanu u present cheydirikkunnath good job keep it


Hi Achukuttan,very heart touching story...But What is love? It is one of the most difficult questions for the mankind. Centuries have passed by, relationships have bloomed and so has love. But no one can give the proper definition of love. To some Love is friendship set on fire for others Maybe love is like luck. You have to go all the way to find it. No matter how you define it or feel it, love is the eternal truth in the history of mankind. Love is patient, love is kind. It has no envy, nor it boasts itself and it is never proud. It rejoices over the evil and is the truth seeker. Love protects; preserves and hopes for the positive aspect of life. Always stand steadfast in love, not fall into it. It is like the dream of your matter of affection coming true.Love can occur between two or more individuals. It bonds them and connects them in a unified link of trust, intimacy and interdependence. It enhances the relationship and comforts the soul. Love should be experienced and not just felt. The depth of love can not be measured. Look at the relationship between a mother and a child. The mother loves the child unconditionally and it can not be measured at all. A different dimension can be attained between any relationships with the magic of love. Love can be created. You just need to focus on the goodness of the other person. If this can be done easily, then you can also love easily. And remember we all have some positive aspect in us, no matter how bad our deeds maybe. And as God said Love all




good read!


thanks
ithu ninte blog ayirunno
Stories - My Soulmate (http://thehiddenmewithinmyself.weebly.com/stories.html)
njan ithu nerathe vayichitundu


kollam daa


nice

thanks all..